This is pretty nice work, Sarah. Your summary of the events was good, and your interviews were excellent. I would have liked to have seen a few statistics in your economic analysis - for example, what airlines went out of business? Your Bibliography (Works Cited) was a little ragged - if you use EasyBib.com it will help organize that for you. Give your papers a good proofreading, and you will see improvement.
This is pretty nice work, Sarah. Your summary of the events was good, and your interviews were excellent. I would have liked to have seen a few statistics in your economic analysis - for example, what airlines went out of business? Your Bibliography (Works Cited) was a little ragged - if you use EasyBib.com it will help organize that for you. Give your papers a good proofreading, and you will see improvement.
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